https://pony.tube/videos/watch/1ac1333d-68c7-4b0f-8752-6f0a33bbd60b The battle for Castle Magna-Malum begins. Equestria's freedom is the prize for victory, but neither side is without its surprises and neither is backing down. As Scarlet's old creations wage war once again, she takes her newfound friends into her old home and seeks its destruction. Meanwhile, her successor has taken a keen interest in an unwitting Daring Do. I did truncate quite a few filler lines in this, but I kept the story itself as it was. This thing is so full of padding, it might as well be a cell in solitary confinement. It also serves as a lesson in "how not to write character dialogue". There is a scene which I marked out with some text that does everything wrong. I wish it were satire, but I was serious at the time. Also, the motivations of the villain, as well as the twist make very little sense, but I'll let you be the judge of how much of a story killer those are. So, that ends series one of this old AU. I do have a couple of misc episode to fill that series with, then I'm onto recording Series 2. It's weird recording these over 12 years later. Not only have I come so far, but I've also come away from a lot of these styles. I realize you haven't seen much of my new stuff at present, but this is not my style at all these days. Still, as bad as it can sometimes be, I think there's some fun in releasing these old works from a bygone age. Like a dusty old draw of unseen trinkets unearthed and finally given out when they have more worth than they would have in their day. Written on - 21 June 2014 Art (by me), completed on - 4 Nov 2026 Fri, 13 Nov 2026 23:04:25 GMT https://validator.w3.org/feed/docs/rss2.html PeerTube - https://pony.tube https://pony.tube/client/assets/images/icons/icon-1500x1500.png https://pony.tube/videos/watch/1ac1333d-68c7-4b0f-8752-6f0a33bbd60b All rights reserved, unless otherwise specified in the terms specified at https://pony.tube/about and potential licenses granted by each content's rightholder. https://pony.tube/w/4iBVGwzwmuNus96svqx5wX;threadId=23665 https://pony.tube/w/4iBVGwzwmuNus96svqx5wX;threadId=23665 Fri, 13 Nov 2026 03:51:25 GMT So, I returned to mumbling the lines toward the end. I don't know why it happens. My assumption is, because the dialogue is so bad, I get bored and try to rush through them. Whatever the reason, I'm gonna try to improve further. I also noticed at least one typo I'd left in, but I know I've gotten better at fixing those. So, practice makes perfect. Here's hoping my voicework follows that saying for more than just the first half, in the future, eh?

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